Monday 17 October 2011

Narrative Outline!

A group of friends decide to take a camping trip away from college, but due to Erin's parents going away Erin is stuck babysitting her younger sister Sophie. So they all decide to camp in Erins back garden instead. One of the girls Alex has never told her friends that she suffers from Schizophrenia, so her friends are completely unaware of any strange behaviour that Alex has once encountered. Whilst with the girls camping Alex loses her medication which keeps her relatively sane, and keeps her paranoia under control. One of the girls, Zoe finds a video on the internet and shows the girls in the tent which triggers something within Alex's mind to make her believe that its real, and she starts to scat out.


When Alex goes into the house to get a drink, Zoe follows her to confront her about her strange behaviour. Alex starts to panic as she doesn't want to tell the truth about her disorder, so instead Alex kicks off and accuses of her of being a bad friend, during the duration of the argument between the two, Alex starts to get more and more angry and strangles her. As she has a moment of realisation to what she's doing its too late, as Zoe is already dead. To hide this from the other girls, she drags Zoe through the house and  hides her in a cupboard. 


As the night progresses Erin goes to look for a torch which is in the cupboard which Zoe is hidden, as she opens the cupboard Zoe falls out and the focus goes to the red kiss which is printed on Zoe's cheek. The girls all gather in the kitchen in a circle, and Anna decides to take control of the group and decides it must be one of the girls that has done it. This leads Alex to another panic, and to try and keep her secret secure, she decides that Anna must be the next to die. Before Alex has chance to get to Anna, Anna stumbles across Alex's pills, but before she has chance to warn the other Erin and her sister, Alex confronts Anna, and brutally stabs her with a knife. Leaving Just Erin her younger sister Sophie and Alex.



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